What do you think of these lyrics? EASY 10 POINTS!?

Oh look you鈥檙e waiting there

Across the street, you hope we鈥檒l meet

But I don鈥檛 care

You had your chance and now you鈥檙e gone

And I was so damn happy with whatever we had going but it didn鈥檛 work out for you

Your smile starts to fade

As I just walk straight past you

Thought you had it made

But it will never work like this

And you were so damn stupid thinking I鈥檇 been hit by cupid but it just don鈥檛 work like that



And you鈥檙e still at the bar

You鈥檙e still on the drink

It鈥檚 ironic, you thought, that you broke up with me

But I just don鈥檛 care now, completely fair how, karma kicked your ***

And you stay home at night

You try and sleep all day

And you get angry, restless, and cry all over me

But I just don鈥檛 care now, completely fair how, karma kicked your ***



What about your texts?

Well they go straight into the trash can

On my cell phone yeah

Because I just don鈥檛 have the time

To think about your story, hear you begging death and glory, 鈥榗uz it didn鈥檛 work out for you

Then you talk to my friends

I鈥檓 sorry but it doesn鈥檛 work

Right now this has to end

This little twisted game you play

It鈥檚 getting boring now, I鈥檓 tired, and I really want you fired, but it never turns out that way



And you鈥檙e still at the bar

You鈥檙e still on the drink

It鈥檚 ironic, you thought, that you broke up with me

But I just don鈥檛 care now, completely fair how, karma kicked your ***

And you shed tears, you cry

You just can鈥檛 dry your eyes

And I can鈥檛 help, but think, 鈥業 want that ***** to die鈥?br>
But I just don鈥檛 care now, completely fair how, karma kicked your ***



Said, karma got you baby

You should have said no

Yeah, karma鈥檚 got you honey

Oohhh,

(Both Choruses, END)



:) It's kind of like, a country/pop/rock kind of song.. if you get me. Like or no?What do you think of these lyrics? EASY 10 POINTS!?
There's no meter flow to it. (Example: "But I don't care" in the first verse is four syllables, all the other verses have FIVE syllables there.) Too much unnecessary profanity. Most importantly, make up your mind if you want it to be pop OR rock OR country, pick ONE, and stick to it.
I agree There is no flow. I like the beginning of the song and the part about Karma. It is good because it shows true feelings and sounds like it comes from a true event.What do you think of these lyrics? EASY 10 POINTS!?
Yeah pretty good. I dont like the line "karma kicked your ***" you could have something else. Like "karma got the best of you" or "karma won, you lost" something like that. But the rest is good!
I cant get a flow out of it.



I don't really like it that much. Story line is good, but the words and the usage is blah.