Rate these freestyle bars on 1-10?

one being the worst, ten being the best



I came up with these randomly. three seperate sets of bars. Imma finish the best one:



Bars#1:

There aint no such thing as bad people

just mistakes

dont get me wrong there can be snakes

karma works slow on them

but, dont worry that Bych will be controllin them

givin them what she owes them

like ????? (tryin to come up with a similie)



Bar set 2: So if life's a *****

and Karma is too

are they freinds, are they cool

or at each othes necks

can't wait to wreck each other's plans

is that **** scams, or 100% real? (unfinished)



Bar set 3: Is it possible

that life is just an illusion, the maya

and things become clearer when you get

higher and higher

finally, you'll come back dowh

don't remember what you heard or sound

or what you found... out

mind's headed southRate these freestyle bars on 1-10?
Well, if you want the truth..



First, it's really hard to judge lyrics without hearing them over a beat, and knowing how you rap them.



Second, your bars are really unbalanced - i'm not seeing any structure in them. Everything is very simple too. Try to avoid single-syllable rhymes. Rhyming multiple syllables sounds a LOT better.



Depending on how long you've been rapping for (i'm assuming you're pretty new to it), I would say don't quit. I've seen MUCH worse from people just starting out. I would suggest you start recording everything though, because lyrics by themselves don't do you much good. The best thing you can do is practice, practice, practice, and if you don't understand something ask another question.
2 definately!..They're okay check out this link..It'll help you with your rhymes!Rate these freestyle bars on 1-10?
I dont really like any of em (sorry) but I'd finish the third and give up on the second and first
I like how you used karma and thingss.

Finish bar numba oneee.
2 is the best rating is 7
i think your first bar was your best( not finished)

god bless!
That is really good! I widh I could heap but i'm bad at writing music!