Lyric help?

big guy comes upto my lady

in the bar

his biceps at par

bulging veins

ready to inflict pain

I stand up to the guy

with erect legs and thighs



we're all pumped up

ready to brawl

lets settle our differences

lets make each other fall

in the fight club

yeah in the fight club



what was i thinking what was i doing

i m surely in for a screwing

lost in the sands of time

my mind a mile away

with hands like hay

what can I dooooooooo



we're all pumped up

ready to brawl

lets settle our differences

lets make each other fall

in the fight club

yeah in the fight club



lets fight already

i ll tear ur shirt u tear mine

tear each other's u ll be fine

spectators urging us i got pumped

and landed a punch on his lump



we're all pumped up

ready to brawl

lets settle our differences

lets make each other fall

in the fight club

yeah in the fight club



his eyes red with rage

R.I.P all ova my face

its karma

what goes around comes around

boommmLyric help?
Whatever it is, it isnt very good.
yeah your right, the 1st paragraph might need some work. but it does make since with the rest of it, so if you want to leave it, it isnt really bad. but the rest of it sounds good. it also might sound better if we heard it.Lyric help?
Ok...what do you want to know?



Ohhh...you wanna know if the lyrics are good? Sorry...no...not to me at least.
You don't have to worry! I won't copy your hard work because I don't think anybody else will want to either!
Hey Dawg.. how about



At the club again and ready to brawl

here they come, trying to make their move

steppin to my lady, bout to take a fall

Sees me stand up, ready to brawl