Descriptive writing - I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!!?

How can I improve this piece of ****? It's a description of a beach:





The rays of sunlight shimmering onto the sprinkley sand; cushioning the glistening ocean. The seaweed sloshing around the rocks like an overgrown garden; the smell of fishy salt piercing the nostrils and brightening the eyes that now shimmer like the glittering ocean. It will reflect the sun for the mere minutes now, and then retire to its other home. Purchasing a drizzling burger, a four year-old boy spoke with a soothed voice, like the sound a child makes when he murmurs his happiness in his sleep. Hynotised by the scent of burgers, the boy's eyes were now shining like a new-polished acorn.





Emerald island jotting out in the arcing bay, each holding their own secret, destined to be explored. Corrosive waves stampeding into the cliff side like a pack of lionesses chasing down an exhausting antelope. A middle-aged man, Standing on a cliff, high above the beach, scowling at the insubordinate beings below. Clad in misty-sandles and a cozy scarf, the elderly individual turns and begins his journey home.Descriptive writing - I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!!?
Just put an adjective in front of every noun, and an adverb in front of every other verb, and hold your nose. It will still be a piece of ****, but at least you tried.